Monday, October 08, 2007

An Introduction to a Gren

Saying that I’ve been working on a story for almost 10 months makes it sound like a pretty impressive story, yes? As if for these past 10 months, I’ve been hunkered over my keyboard, tweaking sentences in an artistic quest for just the right word to make my audience burst into spontaneous applause there in their distant cubicles and home offices. The truth is somewhat less thrilling. The story whiled away most of its ten-month life sitting unloved and untouched. Oh…I spent a great deal of time thinking about it in my car or as I drifted off to sleep. But actual work has been pretty sparse. Unlike previous stories I’ve attempted, however, I never lost my love for the characters or the story premise. See…some one had asked me, early in my life as a blogger named Moksha Gren, what in the world “gren” meant. After mulling over the best way to answer that, I fell in love with the idea of simply introducing everyone to the twisted, little creature called a gren. So, after a few months of neglect, I would always slink back to my computer and peck a few extra words here and there before drifting away again. Then, I made a deal with myself. Since the events told in the story take place in October, I figured October would be a good time to post it. And since I came to this conclusion in July or so…it fit nicely into my natural inclination toward procrastination.

And suddenly it was late September and I hadn’t opened the story in months. Panicked, I began rushing around, squeezing in writing time wherever I could, forcing my poor wife to edit at a frantic pace. My cousin Tony out in Reno had agreed to draw some sketches to accompany the story. But my lack of time management now means the story will be posted sans artwork since Tony hasn’t even seen the story yet.

But……the story will be posted.

And that in itself is an amazing thing for me right now. It’s the first story I’ve completed since I was in college. And though I tried valiantly to follow my usually routine…I did not let this one slip silently into the forgotten recesses of my brain without ever seeing the light of day. I’m proud of that. True, it’s got some cumbersome sections. The linguistic artistry is not what I had hoped and I don’t think I was able to capture everything I had wanted. But, I still love the story and my wife tells me that it’s “better than she expected.” I’m taking it as a complement.

So, I’ve set up a new blog called From Erebus to house this and any future fictional writings I do. It’s just an empty shell as I type this, but on October 11th I’ll lift the curtain on the first section of my first story, Piper and the Gren.

I’m a bit nervous.

11 comments:

Mark said...

I can hardly wait!

So, you took the approach of not posting the first chapter until the story was complete. Hmm... interesting. I was thinking of trying that with the story I'm currently writing. We'll see.

Meanwhile, I look forward to your tale of the gren.

Moksha Gren said...

While I'm slightly envious of folks like you and Cheeseburger who can start posting before the story is complete...I couldn't have done that for this one.

First, it was tough in the early stages for me to hold all the relevent details of continuity in my head. Judgeing by the number of inconsistencies I had to edit out over the various drafts....I'm very glad I didn't shoot from the hip on this.

Secondly, until just recently, I was not 100% sure I would finish. I didn't want to start the tale and then leave everyone hanging. At some point in the future, I may try the post-as-you-go method. But not today.

Anonymous said...

Suscribed! Labeled "Moksha's Gren (stories)", right under "Moksha Gren" in my RSS feed list. And October IS the best month for creature stories - never too many.

Josh & Emily said...

Oh Boy, posting it on my birthday! Happy birthday to me!! It better make me smile..damnit

Simon said...

Ah... um, say... excuse me? Do you have a tissue? I seem to be oozing something over here.

Oh, never mind. It's just a little bit of anticipation. I'll just pretend like it's supposed to be there.

Carry on!

Moksha Gren said...

Emilie - Great! But the rss feed won't be quite as useful for the story as it is for this site since the story (unlike here) should be pretty regular. Part 1 will great the public on Thursday, then I'll fall into a Monday Wednsday Friday posting cycle with the conclusion in Part 9 being posted on Halloween.

But, I'm happy to hear I've got one subsription already. And thanks again for your help with the translations. They were a huge help.

Jet - I set the opening sequence of the story to occur on your birthday...for no apparent reason other than I figured you'd get a kick out of it. So posting it on the same day only made sense.

Simon - Only a litte bit of anticipation? Well, perhaps I should shelf this for a few more months...hold out 'til you need a frakkin' towel.

Also, don't think I've forgotten that you promised me a quid pro quo in the fiction department.

Anonymous said...

Nice use of mythology in the blog title...Suggests stories rising up through the archetypal (archetypical?) at the bottom of your brain into the light of the blogosphere. I give it a 10. :)

Simon said...

I may already need a towel, but sometimes I don't want to come across as, well, "easy", you know what I mean? (But thanks for the BSG nod in your comment reply there.)

No, I haven't forgotten the quid pro quo thing. *sigh* I'll have to turn on the idea generation machine and what I can force it to belch out.

Sincerely,
Sillyman

Anonymous said...

I was so worried about whether it's archetypal or archetypical that I forgot the noun I was describing...insert "ooze" after the parenthetical. :)

Simon said...

Mouse, I think it's 'archetypal', but we all knew what you meant.

And hey!! It's coming tomorrow, eh? Sweet...

Anonymous said...

Hey looking forward to it...heading there now. It is always a little nerve racking when you put a creation out there for everyone to see.